I had
heard quite a lot about this author’s books, and seen that they were popular
before I decided to request to borrow a copy of her first one on a Kindle
Lending site. As the story goes, it certainly delivers a clean, godly fantasy
story free of objectionable elements that carried important messages about
salvation and the Christian life. Even if it takes a while to ‘get into’
there is enough excitement to keep the reader interested, and for the story
to stick in the mind after they have finished reading it.
As that sort of heroic fantasy in which the characters have to engage in a
perilous quest or journey, it isn’t bad. There are certainly some lovable,
unforgettable and unique characters, plenty of friendship, loyalty and even a
smattering of romance- as well as a few- interesting made up creatures for
the characters to Battle. I would certainly consider other works by this
author, but, this one was not a favourite. Perhaps I will enjoy her later
ones better if I come to read them.
When it comes to the negatives, other reviewers have mentioned some editorial
slip-ups and a few typos. I had two or three major issues. One is that whilst
authors have a lot more freedom to create their own imaginative worlds in
fantasy- I do not believe good fantasy should be entirely removed from
reality as far as the basic realities of human nature are concerned. So, I
really felt that Druet, the protagonist was far too perfect. Yes, sometimes
he despaired of his mission- but that seemed to be his only fault. Dare I say
that he also sometimes appeared annoyingly self-righteous and sanctimonious?
I understand that he deplored injustice, and set of on his quest to bring
just rule to the land- but it seemed to me that it was he and his friends who
were the ones that ultimately decided and defined what this ‘justice’
entailed. Seemingly, anything that did not fit into their ideas of something
akin to modern, democratic egalitarianism.
One could be forgiven for being surprised that he even approved of the notion
of having a King. There were also areas in which his idealism seemed
hypocritical. For instance, he believed that peasants should not be oppressed
or subjected to unfair taxes- yet condemned the practice of paying and housing
soldiers in castles- giving them ‘the best food and accommodation’ as
‘coddling’ and ‘bribery’ to keep them loyal. So, were their masters just
meant to let their soldiers freeze and starve- and not pay their retainers
who often had families of their own to support- simply because they were not
‘peasants’?
Not to mention that he and his comrades also seemed to be nigh on invincible.
Druet himself
was able to recover from serious injuries that bought him to the point of
death more than once- with the help of some healers and a flower possessing
miraculous healing properties. One could question why healers with years of
experience had to rely on said plant, instead of making best use of their
expertise and whatever other substances and natural remedies they might have
had to hand with similar properties is anyone’s guess.
The second major issue I had was the way in which all but one of the ‘nobles’
were cast as the villains and universally evil, greedy, corrupt, self-serving
and tyrannical. Yet they seemed evil for no other reason that they were
noble. As though being born to the noble classes somehow made a person
inherently bad, and predisposed them to all of the negative traits above-
whereas all of the peasants seemed inherently good, honourable, chivalrous,
smart, strong and loyal- as well as possessed of an uncanny ability to defeat
trained soldiers.
OK, I understand that Americans don’t like nobles, or the idea of a
hereditary aristocracy- but depictions like this get to me. I have seen it in
other novels directed at people of certain races and nationalities (often the
English), and I still deplore is as naΓ―ve, hateful, prejudiced and
inaccurate.
The scripture teaches us that all humans are inherently sinful- and (whilst I
appreciate the author was not seeking to make any kind of theological statement)
hence it is not something which is determined by class or race. Peasants in
the past could be just as corrupt, greedy and violent as any money-grabbing
or tyrannical Lord- and I think this should be put across.
At one point it even seemed to be implied that nobles and their followers
were somehow excluded from God's plan apparently because of their supposed
inherent wickedness, when all commoners, even non-believers, were seemingly
not. A theologically troubling notion if I do have it correct.
Perhaps I may be accused of going into too much detail, or being too pedantic
about a work of fantasy but I do believe these issues are worthy of note. As
stated above, this novel did have its plus points, and I would certainly be
interested enough to read more by this author- but I’m not sure I’d want to
shell out the nearly £5 that Amazon UK charges for the privilege. I would
recommend it, but it’s not a favourite- a little too much social prejudice
for my liking.
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