Kindle Edition, 48 Pages
January 11th 2012
Death or an arranged marriage, Verity refuses to accept the choices.
Favian's father dies unexpectedly. Her half-brother, Verdon, lays claim
to all their father left behind: title, castle, and her. Verdon cannot
touch the land set aside for her dowry so he offers her hand for sale to
the highest bidder. Lord Silvanticus, a man renowned for his military
power and close ties to the king, makes the winning bid. Despite the
rumors of Silvanticus’ madness and cruelty, Verdon accepts.
locks her away in a tower. She is not sure if he seeks to prevent her
from fleeing the marriage or spreading the truth only she seems willing
to speak: Verdon killed their father. Either way, her time is running
own about five Kindle books by Rachel Rossano, but chose to read this
one first as a short introduction to her work- and frankly because, as I
am part way through about three other titles, I did not want to start
another full-length book yet.
Overall, I was very pleased with
this short story. It rather reminded me of traditional tales, with the
pretty girl locked in a tower, and paid homage to traditional ideas,
beliefs and values such as chivalry, honour and true love.
was a contemporary spin, as the heroine was said to be able to use a
sword. She was also strong-minded and intelligent enough to cater to
modern tastes- but (and this is something I apprecaite), was not some
stuck up feminist superhero. She used her brains, but was not adverse to
accepting help from men, and whilst being headstrong, was also
vulnerable, and her outspokeness nearly lands her in very hot water.
also appreciated the nice, refreshing twist on the usual cliched
'forced marriage' story. I confess, I don't have a lot of time for tales
like that, as they annoy me, as do the attendent myths and historical
inaccuracies. As this was historical fantasy, the author could have gone
along the typical route, ignoring the ban on forced marriage in he
actual, historical Medieval past- yet she did not.
I don't want to
give away too much of the ending but lets just say that the chosen
husband is not as bad as is initially thought, and certainly does not
meet the arranged marriage stereotype of horrible and abusive.
he fitted in well with the over-arching theme which (I think) was about
not judging people by appearances, or by what others say about them.
That there may be a lot more below the surface- hence the clever title-
Word and Deed. I personally guessed one of the main plot twists quite
early on, but that did not really detract from my enjoyment of this
My only complaints were a few typos in the story which
sadly slipped through the editing process, and some of the content,
which might make the story more approporate for older readers, and not a
YA audience. Overall though, I consider it £1 well spent.